When dawn unveils the promise of the day,
And gentle notes drift softly in the air,
The heart remembers love’s enduring sway,
A melody both tender and so rare.
Through corridors of time, a song appears,
Resplendent as the golden morning light,
And in its chords, the echo of our tears
Transforms to joy, dispelling darkest night.
For music weaves a tapestry of dreams,
Each thread entwined with laughter, hope, and grace,
While love, the sweetest muse, forever seems
To find in every soul a sacred place.
If happiness be sought, then let it be
In love and song, the heart is always free.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: July 10th, 2025 01:08
- Comment from author about the poem: Let music and love rule our lives.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 28
- Users favorite of this poem: Kevin Hulme
Comments10
I think I've exhausted my vocabulary when it comes to your sonnets, Andy. Please let me know if 'Bravo!' is acceptable.
Yes Dave, Bravo is always acceptable, thank you.
Andy
A fine write Gold, and a sensible song, not like some rot of today.
Thank you Orchi.
Simply beautiful Andy
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
Yes a great message here.Love and Music.Both are sacred in our lives.Enjoyable read mi amigo
Thank you David, much appreciated.
Andy
Forever and always, lovely write
So true Tobani, thank you.
Andy
You are very welcome
Beautiful work. Powerful.
Much appreciated Thomas, thank you.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
Beautiful, Andy. I think music is a universal language. Like poetry it contains beauty and truth. Your sonnet has both of those aspects. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
Thank you Phil. People understand music in their lives more than anything.
Andy
Enjoyable Sonnet. Sort of Poetry I like to read.
And John Denver had such a fine Voice.
Nice one.
Much appreciated Kevin, thank you.
Andy
This is a perfect sonnet in every way. Composed with great care and poetic acumen. A complete and absolute joy to read. Excellent! Very well done indeed.
All the best,
Tony.
|Very much appreciated Tony, thank you.
Andy
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