Sky is clear
Stars soon out.
What have I got to complain about!
It may be cold
The wind is up.
I am chilling out!
Time to sup...
You gave it all
What do I need?
Your provision gives nothing to greed.
Fingers go numb
Joints feel the strain.
You always come through!
I suffer no pain.
I heard you saying-
Your burden is light...
I can't help but praise You...
On this chilly night.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It took be about thirty minutes to log on..\r\nI suspect cloudflare is trying to freeze me out!
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Comments7
I feel the cold and to me cold conveys the feeling of being shut out. A metaphor seems in the air. Well done
Beautiful.
Can confirm chilly and cold, that's for sure
Logging on can be a bugger. Next time round (when it is fresh in me mind) I'll let ya kno me system - it works about eight times out of ten - mostly.....
Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting blocked, but the poem remained, trended, got commented on. Not sure what that was all about. LOL! Sigh. As for your poem, I am glad that you were able to post it finally. Powerful, my friend. Well done. 🌹
Great write
Seems like Cloudflare is miffed at not having a poem written about them. 🕊️🙏🏻
Beautiful sir, thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
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