Chilling out

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Sky is clear 

 

Stars soon out.

 

What have I got to complain about!

 

It may be cold

 

The wind is up.

 

I am chilling out!

 

Time to sup...

 

You gave it all

 

What do I need?

 

Your provision gives nothing to greed.

 

Fingers go numb

 

Joints feel the strain. 

 

You always come through!

 

I suffer no pain.

 

I heard you saying-

 

Your burden is light...

 

I can't help but praise You...

 

On this chilly night. 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 10th, 2025 02:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: It took be about thirty minutes to log on..\r\nI suspect cloudflare is trying to freeze me out!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 45
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Damaso, Cheeky Missy
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  • sorenbarrett

    I feel the cold and to me cold conveys the feeling of being shut out. A metaphor seems in the air. Well done

  • Thomas W Case

    Beautiful.

  • Doggerel Dave

    Can confirm chilly and cold, that's for sure
    Logging on can be a bugger. Next time round (when it is fresh in me mind) I'll let ya kno me system - it works about eight times out of ten - mostly.....

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting blocked, but the poem remained, trended, got commented on. Not sure what that was all about. LOL! Sigh. As for your poem, I am glad that you were able to post it finally. Powerful, my friend. Well done. 🌹

  • Tony36

    Great write

  • arqios

    Seems like Cloudflare is miffed at not having a poem written about them. 🕊️🙏🏻

  • Damaso

    Beautiful sir, thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.



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