Here’s a rose
living in the place where she’s always been
standing lightly with grass comforting her space
a soft sound echoing around her space
a soft gentle feeling
being there
and the rose is used to this grass knows the feeling that tends to be there
a relaxing feeling whispering lightly
and here lives a light ladybird in shades of red with little parts of the night
living like circles of the night on her fragile delicate space
ladybird also knows grass well
And sees the rose
a flower much taller than her
decides to say hello with her small nature and those little feet
wandering if rose can see her
both are quiet , silent
unable to speak and greet each other with words
they sit side by side with the grass
with the soft brush of a feeling before them
ladybird and rose
one sits small, walks slowly sometimes
as it’s a ladybirds way
and the rose stands tall
drifts in the breeze
wandering what it would be like to take a walk at all
both are different in their own way
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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You write emotions
Very well.....
Thankyou )
Warm welcome
Living in harmony does not require each to be the same in fact in music by definition harmony is not the same note but different notes that combine to make a pleasing sound. A lovely write.
Thankyou very much for your lovely comment 🙂
And that is true ,
Appreciate your support
Wonderful words Yellow Rose.
Andy
Thankyou )))
Wow. Beautiful, my dear friend. There’s a silence to this that I didn’t want to disturb. It feels like witnessing something sacred in nature’s hush...a shared moment between two beings who simply see each other. The gentleness in this piece settles like mist on the soul. Excellent job. 🌹👏
Thankyou so much for such a kind and thoughtful comment ..🙂
Appreciate that
Im glad my poem was liked .
You are most welcome, my friend!
Such delicacy in describing the joy of nature, even in its most abbreviated scale. A spectacle for the senses. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
Thankyou very much 🙂 I think some parts of nature are gentle ,
Glad you enjoyed the poem )
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