Grace,
When will you pay a visit?
I cannot predict it
For cosmic
Mercies
Thank Heavens
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Love this one it is a great play on words and a mind twister.
Thanks, Soren. I enjoyed working on the mind-twisting!
You are welcome
That is so clever, enjoyed
Thanks. This one surfaced almost effortlessly!
You are very welcome
This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting. Grace as a visitor…or maybe as something we keep mistaking for alien light. Love the sparseness here, Mutley. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
I wrote it as a personal prayer/wish with a healthy dose of gratitude mixed in. On the flipside I was trying to drop a hint to folks who are alienated from any kind of "power" outside of their own will or the will of others, hence Grace paying a visit would be an "alien visitation" for sure! Thanks for dropping by!
It sure would. Love it my friend! You are most welcome!
This poem is intriguing as the universe conducts itself. Nice write.
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