The Echo Chamber

Samuel


Notice of absence from Samuel
I’ll be gone 7/26/2025…

 

I wrote with blood,

She answered with breath.

Whispers from someone who’d already left.

She typed like she meant it,

But silence still screamed—

A ghost in my inbox,

A digital dream.

 

I gave her the storm,

She sent back a mist.

Half-hearted lines

That shadowed the twist.

“I love you,” she said,

But her hands were with him.

Like signing a song

While the melody’s grim.

 

I asked her for truth,

She gave me delay.

Like healing could wait

While she wandered away.

Breadcrumbs and riddles,

Circles and grace—

Every reply just a mask on her face.

 

Her therapist taught her

To name every scar,

But not to look back

And see who they are.

Not to ask questions

When mirrors might crack.

Not to face the man

She stabbed in the back.

 

The DMs stayed quiet,

The emails grew thin.

She spoke in the margins

But not deep within.

She told me her pain

Like a badge on display—

But dodged every moment

She pushed me away.

 

And now here I sit,

With nothing but proof—

That love without cost

Was her favorite truth.

But I carry the weight

Of a love that won’t lie.

And she carries silence—

Too scared to say why.

 

So I’ll be the fire

That no one could tame.

And she’ll be the shadow

That won’t speak my name.

And if she ever wonders

What love really cost…

It’s the man who stayed burning

While she counted the loss.

  • Author: Samuel (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 19th, 2025 20:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem came from the silence after honesty — when you lay everything bare and get half-truths in return. It’s about being told you’re still loved, while watching someone build a life without you. It’s for anyone who’s ever begged for clarity, but got quiet instead.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 7
  • Users favorite of this poem: Priya Tomar, Cheeky Missy, sorenbarrett
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  • Cheeky Missy

    There's a reason my family forbade online romance, and as such mercifully never but fizzled you remind me why, in a sense. What a cruel jest, though! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.

  • sorenbarrett

    This poem is well written in narrative form. It tells the story clearly in a flowing organized manner and with good rhyme as well. Very nicely done and a fave



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