You are
At birth
A blank page
Upon which
The trials of life
Will be written
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Author:
Bella Shepard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: And so the story begins.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 73
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Comments10
Hello Bella,
Wisdom personified in a single breath of verse. It's really beautiful. Very well done, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
Thank you my friend! My very best to you.
Maybe short but that is so true and beautiful, just up to us to fill the page up, enjoyed the read
Than you for your kind words!
You are very welcome
Truth in a few lines Bella. And in some peoples books it written in black and white I prefer color myself. Loved it Bella
Thank you dear friend, a few lines seems to be all I have in me these days. I suppose we can live that black and white life, boring. I say, the more color the better! Take care.
You are most welcome Dear Bella. I have found that a few lines get more reads than longer poems so all the better more exposure.
Very true Bella, my page is very nearly filled now.
Andy
But how wonderful the story written upon those pages, yes? Thank you Andy, most kind.
Very well put🕊️ .
Bella, there’s real clarity in this poem. No overreach, no extras... just truth laid down. That final line doesn’t blink..the "will" in that line hits as it should: with certainty. Beautifully powerful in its brevity and impact. 🌹👏 A fave, my friend.
Dear Poet I thank you from the bottom of my heart, your kind words mean a great deal to me. Thank you for the fave.
You are most welcome, dear poet and friend. 🖤♰🦇🪞🩸🕯️
Yeah, but you can also fulfill the purpose for which you were born. Nicely done!
Bullseye! ... Now bring it all on...
Thank you for this delightful comment! I appreciate you reading, and I'll try real hard.
Stunning
Grateful, thank you!
I've been on my summer holidays dear Bella in July, sorry to have missed this one, you just wrote an epic that can go into eternity, brava my dear friend. 🌹
I'm at a loss for words sweet friend, to tell you how much your comment means to me. When I came to MPS I was a newbie, but I had the good fortune to learn from a master, and I thank you for all the encouragement you've given me, you truly shine.
❤️
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