When the have to's are over
The should do's are done
And the grass grows tall
Around their rotting frames
We will laugh again
Feel some fondness for ourselves
Breathe deeply of the freedom
Lift our faces to the sun
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Author:
Lorna (
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- Published: July 27th, 2025 06:32
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 14
- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
Comments5
Excellent write
Well worded this poem is one of knowing that things will get better. Lovely
A lovely write, striding forward knowing it has to get better, enjoyed the read
Hello, Lorna,
What a beautiful way to end this lovely poem of yours but to face the sun. The warmth of the ending just's gladdens the heart. Excellent!
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
What a delightful gift and lovely thought you have left us with my friend .. excellent ink .. Neville
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