For my brothers, fighting it; with; in; me.
For my sisters, healing it; with; in; me.
For my father, drilling it; with; in; me.
For my mother, nur'tring it; with; in; me.
And my Divine Family, living it; with; in; me.
"That you may find eternal peace with; in; me."
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Author:
Spencer Wilhelm (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Trying to pray, and this is what came to mind. Always love feedback! God Bless. Spencer J. Wilhelm
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I love the way the repetition at the end of each line reinforces the feeling of the poem and it builds climaxing in the last line. Nicely done
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I love the sentiment of the write and layout, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
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