at the beach
sudden summer shower
some dart for cover
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Author:
Jerry Reynolds (
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- Published: August 2nd, 2025 06:26
- Category: Nature
- Views: 15
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
at the beach
sudden summer shower
some dart for cover
Comments6
Short, to the point, it paints a picture and if one dives deeper a metaphor of life in other areas. Well done
Thanks, SB.
You are most welcome Jerry
I dived straight in and lo, I loved it .. succinctus superbus & all that jazz .. Neville
Much appreciated.
We have all done at some stage in our life, enjoyed the read
I have the feeling you are not one who darts for cover, more power to you. Let the shower come. Good write!
Thanks, Bella.
Very true Jerry.
Andy
More space for us 🤣 ere Jerry get on your own towel. LoL 🤣 hey I'm currently on a small island that is exactly as you describe one drop of rain and the whole beach is mine 🌹
Thanks, Teddy. Isn't that just the greatest?
Yes... 🏝️
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