Mother's Wrath (senryu)

Teddy.15

 
air, twisting magic
 
atmosphere angrily moans
 
theatre in clouds.
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 4th, 2025 12:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: When Mother Nature speaks... Senryu, speaks with emotion and is 17 syllables 3 lines 5/7/5 💜 one of my favourite forms.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • sorenbarrett

    I have been to that play several times and have to say that I loved it each time. A lovely senryu Teddy it speaks with thunder lightening the meaning with heavenly stage lights. Loved it my friend

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you, I've been in America and the Carribbean when she has come knocking, once I was even on a plane. Thank you my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        You are the most welcome

      • Poetic Licence

        One of the few plays I have seen more than once, but thankfully not in a plane, enjoyed the read

        • Teddy.15

          I was up in the clouds the storm was below, I actually never enjoy flying after that experience, thank you dear P.L. I hope in the UK the storms have passed, I've been seeing them today on the news. 🌹

          • Poetic Licence

            You are very welcome, they are still going but it's August, wouldn't expect anything else!!

          • Thomas W Case

            Brilliant imagery. I can feel it.

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you dearest Thomas. 🌹



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