air, twisting magic
atmosphere angrily moans
theatre in clouds.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Published: August 4th, 2025 12:51
- Comment from author about the poem: When Mother Nature speaks... Senryu, speaks with emotion and is 17 syllables 3 lines 5/7/5 💜 one of my favourite forms.
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Damaso
Comments3
I have been to that play several times and have to say that I loved it each time. A lovely senryu Teddy it speaks with thunder lightening the meaning with heavenly stage lights. Loved it my friend
Thank you, I've been in America and the Carribbean when she has come knocking, once I was even on a plane. Thank you my dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
You are the most welcome
One of the few plays I have seen more than once, but thankfully not in a plane, enjoyed the read
I was up in the clouds the storm was below, I actually never enjoy flying after that experience, thank you dear P.L. I hope in the UK the storms have passed, I've been seeing them today on the news. 🌹
You are very welcome, they are still going but it's August, wouldn't expect anything else!!
Brilliant imagery. I can feel it.
Thank you dearest Thomas. 🌹
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