Notice of absence from Poetic Licence
The weekend is here
Take a deep breath and
Relax.
The weekend is here
Take a deep breath and
Relax.
Blinded Sheep.
Blinded sheep were knowingly lead.
Claiming land bankrupt of compassion and kindness.
Sharpened tongues slowly driven in.
Tobani June 2025.
Tortured Heart.
Anticipated climax of passion burst.
Yearn of accepted love was abruptly denied.
Tortured heart lay in pieces.
Tobani June 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Twin Peaks .. could they possibly get any better than this .. Neville
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A double dunt
Can't fav it twice
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Although at first appearing nonrelated they soon seemed to take on common properties and merged into one landscape. Nicely done Tobani
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You are most welcome
Fascinating. I am NOT awake, have a purring kitten thinking I shouldn't be on my phone playing around and on me, and am rather baffled. If the sheep were knowingly led, then--? They claimed land... but people have done that for millennia... yet they had neither compassion nor kindness...yes, conquerors are typically ruthless... "sharpened tongues slowly driven in"--? You got me there, what's that mean? For your second, consider this: "He satisfieth the longing soul, and filleth the hungry soul with goodness. "(Ps 107:9) From our fellows, men or women, and from romantic engagements, or friendships, we may and do seek love, yet I have found no satisfaction except in the LORD.
Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Hi relates to todays world, my country and others, people just following, compassion and kindness has practically disappeared and the tongues that continue to drive division and hate in our society, hello to the fluffballs, hope this helps, have fun
It helps immensely. Thank you very much! I'll give them your kind hellos. Thank you again.
You are very welcome
Hello,Tobani,
The last lines of each of the two poems bond perfectly bringing the two well wrought pieces together enhancing theme of despair and cruelty. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
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Two for one, nicely done. Your poem "Blinded Sheep" explores themes of suffering, betrayal, and the consequences of blind faith or trust. The "blinded sheep" symbolize individuals who follow without questioning, leading to exploitation and emotional pain. The lines about a "tortured heart" emphasize the deep emotional scars caused by unreciprocated love or betrayal.
Value for money!! Thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
I was able to identify with the sheep in some ways. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
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A wonderful pair🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you, very much appreciated
Most welcome Dear friend🙏🏻🕊️
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