How much do they care?
Not looking for attention, just putting it out there...
Can poetry be that powerful?
Even if no one is listening..
Should we give them a mouthful!
I don't know the answers, I am rather slow...
Who removed the cancer, who let the words flow?
The wall is brought down, the veil is torn...
Rise from the ashes, the Word, can be reborn.
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Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Since my last rant, I haven\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t even needed to log in!\\\\r\\\\n \\\\r\\\\nHallelujah, I say.
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Hallelujah
It seems like a minor miracle, and I am grateful!
Poetry can have power as is raised in this work. It does depend on who reads it and how it strikes them at that moment. It is a game of chance but worth playing. Nicely worded
And hear I am, haven\'t had to go through the \" log on\" battle since!
Hallelujah, I say.
Thanks
You are most welcome
The poem’s strength lies in its honest questioning and its faith in expression. It doesn’t claim certainty, but it dares to speak anyway. That’s poetry at its most human.
I think I need the superhuman!
It just took me 5 minutes to log on, again- all's well. It was a joy while it lasted.
I do know that feeling when it does decide to occur. Tech is such a battle sometimes.
That's my rant, " why is it so?"
I hope you are write
Ha!
Some listen. Most naught. Most only manifest what taught.
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