Where Had His Mind Gone?

Goldfinch60



There we were playing,

Playing a match,

Playing against a team,

A team I used to play for

I knew them all.

Then came the game,

The game that saddened me

Against a friend,

A friend I had not seen,

Not seen for a while.

Onto the lawn we went

And started to hit the balls,

But it was so sad.

This man I knew

Was different,

He was confused,

Confused about the game,

The game he had played forever.

A very good player

Who had beaten me,

Beaten me in the past,

But he was not the same.

His mind was confused

I had to keep correcting him.

Yes I beat him,

Beat him easily,

But this was not the man,

The man I once new.

What had happened to him?

Where had his mind gone?

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 14th, 2025 01:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: A friend that I had not seen for a while had become confused in his mind, I feel so sad about this.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. Happened to me. I wrote to them in a Care Home and they thought I was persecuting them.

  • sorenbarrett

    Mental changes as sad or more so than physical changes a tragic write Gold

    • Goldfinch60

      They certainly are soren, my wife died from dementia so I know it very well.

      A ndy

    • Poetic Licence

      A very sad write that will be familier to so many, nicely expressed

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true Tobani. Thank you.

        Andy

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome, and best wishes to your friend

        • Teddy.15

          Bless him. 🌹

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Teddy.

            Andy



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