In your light
I can learn how to love
with courage and trust
knowing if I fall, you'll be here
to remind me, getting back up
is a must
from inside my torso
I feel you
from inside my mind I hear you
and it's in those magnificent moment's
I become a poet.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A(musing)s π€£
- Category: Reflection
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A lovely write of the process, the ups and downs and the needed support from others that brings inspiration. A wonderful write Teddy
Inspired by your musings today dearest sorrenbarret so thank you. I should have called this fire in my soup, I actually have many titles for this one. π€£
A really nice write of factors needed to give that spark or inspiration to get the pen out, enjoyed the read
Thank you dear P.L for such a lovely review. πΉ
You are very welcome
My dear, dear Teddy. I could feel this in me as I read it. It hit me deep at the soul level, which is what I really love about your work my friend. Indeed, this is where poetry happens. The muse is a precious guide and you are a magnificent poet in those moments and many others! A fave from me. I will be thinking about this one, my dear friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
You my dear Tristan have truly brightened my morning with these beautiful words of kindness, thank you dear friend, may your muse always grace you with fire in your soul. πΉ π
Amen! May it be so! So mote it be! π€£ I am truly glad my words made your morning a little brighter! That now makes my morning brighter...the gift that keeps on giving. Have a great day, my friend! πΉπ
Dear, Teddy,
'Magnificent moments' are far and few between, that you have captured one is the makings of a great poem, as this one surely is. As if composed when your innards were all aglow. A poet you are, without a doubt.
You are in fine health and happy, I trust,
Tony.
Thank you my dear Tony I'm 50 and fabulous for a few more weeks then I'll be 51 π€£
I was 67 on the 13th of this month and feeling fabulous too.
Happy belated birthday my friend. πΉ Love the 13th it's one of my lucky numbers.
'getting up is a must' - what a wonderful and practical thought... beautiful and thought provoking verse
Thank you so much dear NafisaSB πΉ it truly is a must. πΉ
hope it stays that way - take care always - stay happy and blessed
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