In your light
I can learn how to love
with courage and trust
knowing if I fall, you'll be here
to remind me, getting back up
is a must
from inside my torso
I feel you
from inside my mind I hear you
and it's in those magnificent moment's
I become a poet.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A(musing)s 🤣
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Poetic Licence, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange, Demar Desu, Poetic Dan
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A lovely write of the process, the ups and downs and the needed support from others that brings inspiration. A wonderful write Teddy
Inspired by your musings today dearest sorrenbarret so thank you. I should have called this fire in my soup, I actually have many titles for this one. 🤣
A really nice write of factors needed to give that spark or inspiration to get the pen out, enjoyed the read
Thank you dear P.L for such a lovely review. 🌹
You are very welcome
My dear, dear Teddy. I could feel this in me as I read it. It hit me deep at the soul level, which is what I really love about your work my friend. Indeed, this is where poetry happens. The muse is a precious guide and you are a magnificent poet in those moments and many others! A fave from me. I will be thinking about this one, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
You my dear Tristan have truly brightened my morning with these beautiful words of kindness, thank you dear friend, may your muse always grace you with fire in your soul. 🌹 💜
Amen! May it be so! So mote it be! 🤣 I am truly glad my words made your morning a little brighter! That now makes my morning brighter...the gift that keeps on giving. Have a great day, my friend! 🌹💜
Dear, Teddy,
'Magnificent moments' are far and few between, that you have captured one is the makings of a great poem, as this one surely is. As if composed when your innards were all aglow. A poet you are, without a doubt.
You are in fine health and happy, I trust,
Tony.
Thank you my dear Tony I'm 50 and fabulous for a few more weeks then I'll be 51 🤣
I was 67 on the 13th of this month and feeling fabulous too.
Happy belated birthday my friend. 🌹 Love the 13th it's one of my lucky numbers.
'getting up is a must' - what a wonderful and practical thought... beautiful and thought provoking verse
Thank you so much dear NafisaSB 🌹 it truly is a must. 🌹
hope it stays that way - take care always - stay happy and blessed
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