The Long Day.

Goldfinch60



The day was so long,

She was not with me.

We were parted all day

And I missed her so much.

Our love is so strong

We need to be together,

But this day we weren’t.

No problems at all,

All was well between us

But I had to go elsewhere,

Go elsewhere for the day.

But the time ended

And home I went

And she was there,

My lover was there.

We fell into each others arms,

Back together again

And back together forever.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 18th, 2025 01:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: I had to go to score a croquet competition for the day which would have been so boring for Mary so I went on my own - never again.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 22
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  • Neville



    You make such a good pair you old fruit ..

    • Goldfinch60

      We certainly do Neville, we are most fortunate. Thank you.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold. I never miss KP - I whoop it up and have a party when she's not with me! lol.

    • David Wakeling

      Distance can make the heart grow fonder. Great happy ending. Always good to read your poems amigo

      • Goldfinch60

        Mos kind David, thank you.

        Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        Distance make the heart grow fonder. Nicely written Andy

        • Goldfinch60

          It certainly does soren, thank you.

          Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            Most welcome Andy

          • Poetic Licence

            You know what they say as others already have, enjoyed the read

          • arqios

            That’s always a beautiful end to a long live day!

            • Goldfinch60

              Very true arqios, thank you.

              Andy

              • arqios

                Most welcome Andy🕊️🙏🏻



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