red moon
casts black shadow
sleeping island
I started to write this three times and each time stopped and started over because my thoughts had changed on its meaning to me. That in itself is the sign of a good piece. Lovely Jerry
Thanks, sorenbarrett. That means a lot to me.
You are most welcome Jerry
Splendid haiku, Jerry 🙏🏻🕊️
Good write J.
Thanks, Orchi.
It surely does Jerry. Andy
Thanks, Andy.
this is just like Mr. Kipling's cakes .. exceptionally good .. 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
Thanks, Neville.
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I started to write this three times and each time stopped and started over because my thoughts had changed on its meaning to me. That in itself is the sign of a good piece. Lovely Jerry
Thanks, sorenbarrett. That means a lot to me.
You are most welcome Jerry
Splendid haiku, Jerry 🙏🏻🕊️
Good write J.
Thanks, Orchi.
It surely does Jerry.
Andy
Thanks, Andy.
this is just like Mr. Kipling's cakes .. exceptionally good .. 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
Thanks, Neville.
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