Swarms Around Me.

Goldfinch60



They are always there!

Every time I drive, they are there

There in front of me

Or behind me.

They are there all the time

And I just do not understand,

There seem to be so many of them

And they seem to be attracted,

Attracted to me.

Am I so magnetic

That they all pull towards me

Like swarms of insects,

Those flaming Fiat Five Hundreds!

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 31st, 2025 01:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: It seems so strange over the last few weeks every time I go out in the car there are Fiat 500's all around me.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 24
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • sorenbarrett

    Coincidence, or popularity of the model a fun read Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      No idea soren but they seem to be all around me . LOL

      Andy

    • Doggerel Dave

      So wot's rong with that?
      Please elucidate.

      • Goldfinch60

        They won't all fit in my boot Dave. LOL

        Andy

        • Doggerel Dave

          You could acquire a motorcycle and weave through them with the greatest of ease.... size does matter....

        • Bella Shepard

          A fun Sunday read, maybe someone should invent a repelent. I know of a few makes I'd like to repel.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Bella, much appreciated.

            Andy

          • arqios

            They must be a tad better than Fiat Uno’s. 🚙🚘🚗🚐

            • Goldfinch60

              Maybe they are Rik. LOL.

              Andy

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Good fun write, Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Jerry.

                Andy

              • Tom Dylan

                I love these cars. In my mind I can see them nipping down the narrow backstreets of Rome rather than the side streets of Salford. 🙂 A fine write that made me smile.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Tom, most kind.

                  Andy



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