Oh go on......!

orchidee

Oh go on, suggests Fido to me

Contribute to a fusioned poem

Though it's often utter rubbish you write there

And use 20 words when 5 will do

No change there then!

 

Oh no, I couldn't, I reply

I'll only muck things up

Ruin the whole thread of the poem

But there's a word or two I'm bursting to say

And here they are:

'Pork Pies Rule OK!'

LOL

You have a go at a fusioned poem, Fido....

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 1st, 2025 02:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Pork pies for ever. lol. You call this 'humour?' says Fido to me!
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 28
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Is it really alliteration if only two consecutive words start with the same letter? Have had chicken pot pies, don't think I ever have had pork pie. Another good one that leaves my mind rambling in pleasant thoughts Orchi

    • orchidee

      Thank you SB. I think it is alliteration, as you say, e.g. Pork Pie.

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome Orchi

      • Neville



        Sorry, I don't think I'm brave enough 😎🐧👍

        • orchidee

          Thank you N. I don't know what to say on most of fusioned poems.

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Said the Hikuest to the Lyrists. Loved it, Orchi.

          • orchidee

            Thank you J.

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            He's strongs to the finish, because he easts his...pork pies. Wait...that's not how it goes! Fido! Fido! Help! 🤮

            • orchidee

              Soooo....... it's the pork pies that do it, not the spinach? Do what? Don't answer that! lol.

            • Doggerel Dave

              Jest tole a porky, din't yer......

              • orchidee

                Thank you Porker, erm, Dave. lol.

              • NafisaSB

                hmm - enjoy the pie, while it's still fresh - lol

                • orchidee

                  Thank you N. lol.

                  • NafisaSB

                    most welcome..cheers

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Pork pies are back Orchi.

                    Andy

                    • orchidee

                      Thank you Gold. lol.

                    • Tom Dylan

                      Completely agree! Pork pies are the best! 🙂

                      • orchidee

                        Thank you T. lol.



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