You can get his point as easy as can be:
It’s the system that’s rotten to the core.
Capitalism doesn’t make you free -
No good calling it democracy.
And the cure? I’ll live in this travesty;
Appropriately quiet the way to go,
Not follow idiots whose insanity
Will lead to yet more instability.
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Author:
Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: September 2nd, 2025 19:54
- Comment from author about the poem: Yet I love calling out transgressors directly WITHIN the system – done so all my life, both up and down the hierarchy. It’s fun, if a little hairy at times.
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There you go Dave I knew you were not a system man. Good show old man, I'm with you
'Welcome Soren. Note the effort and the edginess of your response. Or as a coconspirator of yours might post - 🤣
How's that winter going? About the same as March in the UK. One of us is upside down! lol.
Now Spring has officially started, it is all over the place...reminds me of you actually.....
Sir Orchi NS is all over the place. lol.
It is so much better to think outside the box Dave, the mind then thinks of proper ways in life.
Andy
Thanks Andy. In the end more freedom.
My friend, this hits sharp. “Capitalism doesn’t make you free”...that line cut straight through, simple and undeniable. You call out the necrosis without apology, and the quiet path you name speaks volumes. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done and a fave...erm...Dave. 😅🤣
People are unfortunately forced to work within the system, but this Sovereign Citizen lot are not only beginning to clog the system such as it is, but can be violent and are becoming downright scary.
' I'm not a Number; I'm a free man'.
You keep kicking against the System.
Old habit. They don't know who they are dealing with until it's too late....
Will my efforts have any effect on this system I keep on banging on about? Doubt it.
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