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sorenbarrett

Comfort wears old cloths

Deceit paints itself with makeup

Arrogance vests in tight fitting shoes

Beauty goes naked

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  • Priya Tomar

    Wow !
    Very beautiful.....

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you for your most kind review it is deeply appreciated

    • Teddy.15

      Reading this as a woman I feel the last line so much. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you so much my friend for your review and understanding remarks it is always appreciated

      • orchidee

        I am not feeling well after that last line. KP read the poem and assumed such a state. It put me off me dinner for a month. Well, put me off fish anyway, as she's an old trout. lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Bone ugly daresent go naked t'would make Medusa turn to stone. Thanks for the read Orchi sorry about the appetite

        • Friendship

          Well-written, but the only thing is you painted an image that I cannot get out of my head of a naked poet, a little bit disturbing, as the first image in my head for the morning, but well said. Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of authenticity versus superficiality. It suggests that true comfort and identity are often found in simplicity, while societal constructs like deceit, arrogance, and beauty are frequently adorned with artificial embellishments.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much for the read and interpretation. Beauty was not meant to be the poet so no need worrying about that image it is merely a conceptual personification where although all other concepts are clothed beauty is never clothed for beauty can never be covered and remain beautiful.

            • Friendship

              You're very welcome, my friend.

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Soren, I like how each line puts on a different โ€œstyleโ€ and then strips it back...comfort worn in, deceit dressed up, arrogance trying too hard, and beauty just showing up plain...no need for clothing or hiding away. Simple, clear, and sharp. Nicely done, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much my friend for the read and most gracious words of kindness. It is most appreciated

              • rebellion_in_sanity

                Absolutely a fave

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks so much Rebellion your words are most appreciated

                • NinjaGirl

                  "Beauty goes naked" I was NOT expecting that! I'd say I'm comfort according to your poem! Good work as always!

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you so much for the review NinjaGirl Anything that covers beauty only decreases it splendor.

                  • Kevin Hulme

                    Fine Write. A Fave

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you so much for the review and most kind words of support.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Wonderful words soren, reality in them all.

                      Andy

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you Andy I appreciate your kind words of support

                      • gray0328

                        Well done Soren beauty goes naked indeed

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thank you Gray I appreciate your review and understanding words

                        • David Hopkins

                          Such perfect simplicity!
                          This is so far one of my favoritesโ€ฆ

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you so much. I appreciate your read and most kind words



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