I love You
I love you more
than you will ever know.
I love you till dust turns to dawn,
till the sun comes up
and the moon comes out.
I love you till the bright sky
fades into darkness.
I love you till the rain stops falling
and the wells run dry.
I love you till the earth stops spinning
and my heart stops beating.
I love you forever,
even when my body turns to ashes.
I love you forever
and evermore.
Poetic Works of Petra Fafina Marina Patrice
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What is love?
Love is everything I wrote and more. Love is everlasting, beyond time, beyond Life and beyond Words.
Now I have to ask what does life without love is like?
I never thought of it that way it’s a tricky question, I must say. My poem focuses on love: loving someone through good times and bad, through all the challenges and joys of life. Love is what gives life meaning, even when everything else feels uncertain. It’s the light that guides us, the bond that holds us, and the force that makes us keep going.
Honestly, there isn’t life without love. Even if it’s from parents, a child, a husband, or a wife… if no one shows concern or care for you, what would life look like? I think sometimes the answers are uncertain because the words ‘I love you’ aren’t spoken often even by the people who truly do love us. Sometimes love is not said, but felt.
Thank you for the comments and questions it really got me thinking.
Told in many ways love of another expressed in poetic verse
Yes, thank you for your words.
Most welcome
Wonderful words Petra, I could have written this for my partner.
Andy
Thank you
One can feel the sincerity in these words that come from the heart. It shows the magic that love can work on an individual. Love is something selfless, it does not ask for anything in return. Thus in this poem there is not one thing that you have asked in return. You give all... The reader must be touched with this...
Thank you
Petra, beautifully written…each image widens the horizon until love covers all...sky, rain, earth, even ashes. It’s eternal, intimate, and deeply moving. Wonderfully done.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you, sorry I have to ask about the emojis heart, candle and bird in all comments.
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