A Whole Heart or Half?

Teddy.15

 
 
I'll keep you bright 
shining for all to see you 
in all your magic 
I'll be your own personal moon
at night
I will believe
in everything you do 
I will encourage you
in all your endeavours 
I'll help you grow 
because I love you...
 
and you? 
what will you do for me?
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  • sorenbarrett

    Poetic promises with the question that most all have. A wonderful write of love as we see it in a fair world. Yet does it really matter? A poem that speaks from a mortal heart about an immortal quality so well written.

    • Teddy.15

      Thnk you so much my dearest sorrenbarret, a question of love that is something millions have on the end of their tongue yet seldom ask. ๐ŸŒน

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Teddy my friend.

      • Bella Shepard

        Selfless love knows no bounds, while conditional or jealous love is self serving. The truly loving heart gives freely, without expectations. Your poem beautifully addresses the true nature of love, and encourages us to ponder its many facets. Loved it!!

        • Teddy.15

          My favourite subject and one question worth asking but the truth is always in the pudding, thank you my dearest Bella. ๐ŸŒน

        • Goldfinch60

          In my case that love is returned between Mary and I and may love be returned to you Teddy.

          Andy

          • Teddy.15

            That's a fact. ๐ŸŒน Thank you dearest Andy

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            My friend, this is powerful. The devotion in your lines shines, but that closing question lingers. For me, love is all in...wholehearted...or itโ€™s not love at all. Or so my heart bleeds. ๐Ÿคฃ Beautifully done. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ› Beautiful poem!

            • Teddy.15

              Get your answer right! LoL love yah. ๐ŸŒน

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                LOL! Love ya too, my dear friend! ๐ŸŒน

              • Fรญna Elara ๐ŸŒ™ Petra Patrice

                Wow beautifully written.



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