Fear of Word Blindness

Neville

Fear of Word Blindness

 

Banks of blank ivorine

stacked high but

thinly like old oriental

  lacquered tsuba ..

Each scream both loud

and high enough

to shatter those fragile

hand blown

champagne flutes you

  long treasured ..

Whereas, somewhere

else completely,

rows of old scribes sit

cross legged

in their temples calmly

contemplating

white noise but fearing

word blindness

   tho still craving obscurity ..

 

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  • Goldfinch60

    In life Neville we always need to move on into reality.

    Andy

    • Neville



      There's no point staying still or stopping is there .. even slowing down is frowned upon around these parts ..

    • Doggerel Dave

      Thanks Neville. I feel a rich picture has been described here, but I cannot quite bring it into focus.

      Any chance of some notes?

      • Neville



        Cheers Dave .. you should have said before .. How much mate? .. Jokes aside it's meant to be about writers block .. and the contrasting need to be well read and anonymous .. with blanks and white spaces liberally spread throughout .. kind of ... Perhaps .. Neville

        • Doggerel Dave

          Aah... I see. Glad to note other more sophisticated responses haven't left you in the lurch, Mate....

        • orchidee

          Good write N. KP never craves obscurity. lol.

          • Neville



            I guess residing with you must come close ..

          • rebellion_in_sanity

            This instantly brought to my "High Poetry". Now thinking...is that at all valid phrase?

            • Neville



              I'll take anything write now .. Bless you .. Neville

            • sorenbarrett

              There is an image here that is so Zen as I meditated on this I see silence in the materials above and below that is filled with the noise of history loud ecos of silence and the fear of not being able to hear it if one can not read it either in words of attention to detail. We live in a society that is becoming less religious and also less attentive to detail a population of ADD with short attention spans. A nice touch adding the monk for it is in meditation that there is enlightenment that needs no adulation. Another nice touch in the tsuba where a family crest may honor a family history and can be seen through like the translucent ivorine. Very refined work here Neville that dives deep into the psyche a fave

              • Neville



                With my hand on my heart I really can't thank you enough .. Your response is far more accurate in terms of what I hoped might be found & also far kinder than I was ever anticipating .. Thank you more than most kindly .. Neville

                • sorenbarrett

                  You are most welcome my friend in its simplicity there is complexity and beauty a most wonderful poem that unravels as one contemplates it.

                • arqios

                  ..."ivorine," such an excellent word, Nev! I remember as a preschoooler enjoying the sight of our heirloom champagne flutes... I hope never to get wordblindness but I guess it could already have set in for yonks without my even noticing... *sigh*

                  • Neville



                    Bless you brother .. and not only that but I love the word yonks .. you didn't go to Delapre High by any chance πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

                    • arqios

                      haha, perhaps in a former life or in an alternate universe πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      Neville, this is striking. The fragility in your images...the shattered flutes, the scribes fearing word blindness...holds tension and weight. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬› A fave from your ol' friend Tristan over here!

                      • Neville



                        Man o man I feel well n truly indulged .. Cheers brother T .. N πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ‘

                        • Tristan Robert Lange

                          You are most welcome, my friend! Well deserved! Cheers!

                        • Tom Dylan

                          Nicely done, Neville. A fine write.

                          • Neville


                            Many thanks Tom .. Neville πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

                          • Friendship

                            Well written, my friend, your poem "Fear of Word Blindness" explores the tension between the desire for expression and the fear of losing one's ability to communicate effectively. It juxtaposes the chaotic, overwhelming noise of modern life with the serene contemplation of ancient scribes, highlighting the struggle between clarity and obscurity. The imagery of fragile objects, such as champagne flutes and lacquered tsuba, signifies the delicacy of language and art, while the fear of β€œword blindness” suggests a deep-seated anxiety about the limitations of words in conveying profound meaning.

                            • Neville


                              and You are amazing .. Bless you dear friend .. Neville



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