Back At It Again
Back at it again,
lingering thoughts, why are you here?
I’ve called a thousand times, no answer,
sent numerous messages, no response.
Now you sit before me,
cold and empty heart.
Back at it again,
lingering thoughts, why are you here?
I’ve called a thousand times, no answer,
sent numerous messages, no response.
Watery, glowing eyes
stare at me, pulling me into deep thought.
Back at it again,
no explanation, just emotions.
Why are you here?
No response.
He sat there speechless,
no words, just emotions.
Where is your heart?
Lingering thoughts… why are you here?
I ask no response. Speechless.
What am I to say with no heart?
Pulling me in, twirling me around
like a playful toy.
Back at it again no emotions.
No need to stand,
have a seat.
Because you’re back at it again,
and now I’m speechless,
with no emotions.
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The repeated phrase gives power to this poem's theme. Clever rewording of words within what would otherwise be repetitive but are cleverly woven into other lines that leave the same feeling. Nicely done
Thank you 🙂Appreciate it.
My pleasure
My friend, reading this felt like those moments when you’re face-to-face with someone, yet completely shut out. That hurt of being pulled in but never answered is painfully real here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
🙂Thank you Tristan
Sound like marriage lol great language and I have to say I prefer to stay in silence when there is need. 🌹
Lol, I understand why. lol thank you 😊 for your comment.
Poem with deep feelings. Nicely expressed. Loved it.
Thank you, appreciate it. 🙂
Well woven poem .
Thank you
Powerful words Petra.
Andy
Thank you
a lovely and clever peace straight from the forlorn heart.
good work
Thank you
you are most welcome
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