Before your gaze, my world did cease,
A silent plea, a sweet release.
My proudest stance, it could not hold,
A story in your eyes, untold.
Each word you spoke, a gentle chime,
Erasing all my sense of time.
My strength, it faltered,
My spirit bent,
On your affection, I was intent.
And there I knelt, upon the floor,
My heart surrendered, wanting more.
Not in defeat, but in pure awe,
Beneath your love's unwritten law.
My pride dissolved, a fleeting mist,
By your mere presence I was kissed.
To be so moved, to be undone,
My dearest love, you are the one.
My knees met earth, a willing fall,
To answer your enchanting call.
In humble worship, I remain, Bound by your love, again and again.
Through it all.
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Author:
Joseph M Marion (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 15th, 2025 15:25
- Category: Love
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Comments1
So well rhymed and with such good flow this poem speaks of worship beyond love. Well done
Thank you so much my friend I write from my heart and don't let my brain confuse things but like I'll poets we reread and reread and reread and reread and repair and redo a million times before it hits even remotely alike
You are most welcome
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