The Bristers.

Goldfinch60



Into the restaurant we went,

Went to book our table,

Book it for the weekend.

Said my name and room number,

They queried it ,

There was another person there,

Another person with my name.

Brister is an unusual name

So is not seen often.

We then went to the show room

To book our table there for the weekend,

And there were two other couples

Both waiting to book as well.

The first one was asked his name,

And he said Brister,

He was the other one.

I told him my name

And we chatted.

The four of us spent time together

To try and work out the relationship

But could not work it out,

But with our time together

We had a wonderful time,

As he and I had the same outlook,

The same outlook on life.

We were and thought the same,

Thought the same on many things

We even used the same sayings

When we met others,

Saying “Good morning young man”,

So alike we could have been brothers.

We came to the conclusion

That we were Bristers,

Two people with a fine life

And we will keep in contact.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 17th, 2025 01:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was so weird yet so wonderful on our weekend in the hotel at the Isle of Wight. Meeting with someone with the same unusual surname as mine. We had a wonderful time talking to each other.
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  • Teddy.15

    lol that's really a life moment, look alike mannerisms and name, Andy, weird and wonderful ๐ŸŒน

    • Goldfinch60

      It certainly was a life moment Teddy, thank you.

      Andy

    • sorenbarrett

      A fun story about the coincidences of life and how it at times is so strange. Life is full of different types of doppelgangers sometimes not physical but personality like.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you soren and very true, life can be amazing.

        Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          Most welcome Andy

        • arqios

          What a chance meeting!

          • Goldfinch60

            It certainly was Rik, thank you.

            Andy

            • arqios

              Most welcome dear Andy๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

            • Fรญna Elara ๐ŸŒ™ Petra Patrice

              This piece is heartwarming and whimsical. It beautifully captures the surprising joy of finding someone who mirrors your own life and habits, creating a natural connection. Nicely written.

              • Goldfinch60

                So kind and so true Petra, thank you.

                Andy



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