i still see you
which tells me that
i should have seen
you sooner but i
was in a place
where i thought you
waiting for me even
as you were leaving.
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Author:
Jon Nakapalau (
Offline) - Published: September 17th, 2025 19:57
- Comment from author about the poem: Right person - wrong time.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments4
Thought provoking paradox in a poem. Well done
Thanks so much!
You are most welcome
Really love the circular overthinking feeling here. Great!
Thank you!
This written piece captures that sharp moment of belated recognition, the pain of missed timing, and a soft, lingering regret.
Nice work
Much thanks!
Thoughtful words Jon.
Andy
Thank you Andy!
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