Sun and sky

Caring dove


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Here is the sun saying a helpful hello to the sky 

singing softly in yellow , to the blues by her side 

in yellow , the only colour her essence knows 

talking to something that always exists when she’s there 

 

sometimes it’s bright blue 

fading in pastels for a time 

or even sighs of greys 

always there , bright blue , balanced 

content calm and happy 

or sighing in greys , 

 

the sun says a helpful hello to the sky 

every time standing strong and shining a light 

living side by side with the sky 

both in different colours 

 

we never hear any words from the sun 

or the sky when it isn’t deciding to rain 

there are whispers of the beautiful breeze 

shouts of the wind when it shows itself 

notes of the birds when they decide to fly in by 

 

yet we never hear words from those two 

they never speak 

yet they always exist side by side 

used to their place in this world 

and used to each other 

and the colours of who they are 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Online Online)
  • Published: September 18th, 2025 13:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just thought to write about the sun and the sky
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 13
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    A wonderful contrast no only in colors but size in substance, in heat nicely contrasted and written

    • Caring dove

      Thankyou very much for the kind words )

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Caring Dove, this glows with warmth. The sun and sky here feel like companions...no words, just presence, greeting each other in colors. That “helpful hello” is simple yet profound, grounding the whole piece. Gentle, calm, and beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Caring dove

          Thankyou very much for your kind thoughtful comment) ) yes, they are existing , being there , keeping each other company .. used to each other I guess ..

        • Goldfinch60

          Such wonderful words about the sun and the sky Melissa, beautifully written.

          Andy

        • rawaneigh.99

          enjoyed reading

          • Caring dove

            Thankyou very much



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