You still not getting it? Fido asks me
Those cryptic poems
You getting the wrong end of the stick?
Making some daft comment
Which ruins the 'Comments' section?!
Cos ya puts ya big foot in it!
It's an escape route at times
Being daft, cos I dunno what a poet's on about
And how can I discern hidden meanings
When I only got 3 brain cells to work with?
That's a bit psychological there, says Fido to me
You'll get a headache thinking out all that
Best have a lie down
And you say - 'Read Hot poems?
'I'll never recover from the swoons'
Yep, you will recover
Cos I'll save ya from falling!
Heehee
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Author:
orchidee (
Offline) - Published: September 22nd, 2025 03:16
- Comment from author about the poem: Ohh, what problems I have. Risking reading hot poems, dangers of swoons, not having enough brain cells, married to KP, etc. What could be worse?! lol.
- Category: Humor
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I wonder how many reviews that I have made that led people down the wrong path on a poem's interpretation and how many frustrated authors have cursed my name for destroying the meaning of their poetic masterpiece. As for those mature one's on another site I skipped one years ago after opening it and since then there is an inscription across all my reviews saying Soren skips erotic material making me look like a prude. Good write Orchi
Thank you SB.
Most welcome Orchi
You is like that serial I used to see at Saturday Morning Pictures - always leaving me in suspenders..... You remember them, don't ya? - no, not the suspenders....
Thank you D. I won't remember the suspenders or else I will swoon. Yes, went to Saturday morning pictures about a million years ago!
Who knoes I mighta sat next to ya - wot abaht that gang wot 'ad their HQ in the middle of the Ghost House at the fair?
How hot does a poem get before it scorches your, eyes? O'l Tom want's to know 🤣
Thank you T. lol. Oh no, Ol' Tom's threatened to start writing his memoirs in poetic form. Don't do it Tom! lol. Why not? he asks. But - don't answer that, Tom! heehee.
LOL! For one his mystery ink won't show up! I keep telling him to let go of that pen, but he's very attached! 🤣 Sentimental ol' bloke he must be! LOL!
He's a lad, that Tom! lol.
You must really struggle with my rants. It's fine, makes you think, poetry's goal.
Thank you D.
Don't worry Orchi, Fido will watch over you.
Thank you Gold. Yes lol, Fido will help.
Another one that made me smile. Nicely done. 😀
Thank you Tom. lol.
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