Heaven's rain

sorenbarrett

A single drop from a clear sky, above no birds fly, from where did it fall
No trees around only dry ground upon it the mark of a water ball
Some things not meant to be, still exist we agree, there is no explanation
A drop of sky caught by the eye, a transformation of information

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  • Teddy.15

    From your title to every line, quite breathtaking my dear sorrenbarret 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you my friend for your review and kind words they are always appreciated

    • Friendship

      The poem explores the idea of unexpected occurrences in life that evoke curiosity and contemplation. It suggests that some phenomena, like a single drop of rain, may lack a clear explanation but still hold significance and beauty.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Friendship for your read and interpretation. Indeed there are many things unexplained that still exist. If we could only know what the explanation was it might transform how we see things.

      • Paul Bell

        I was thinking of a nuclear fallout site where nothing grows.
        Nature does eventually clean it all.

        • sorenbarrett

          A most interesting take. Thank you for your interpretation and comment it is deeply appreciated

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Soren, what a piece. It reads like a hymn to the inexplicable…a reminder that not everything must be understood to be real. That paradox is its own kind of grace. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛ A fave, my friend.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much my friend for taking the time to read this piece it is most appreciated and your kind words of comment are most valued

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              You are most welcome, Soren!

            • Dan Williams

              "A drop of sky caught by the eye". . . just wonderful in its simple wisdom. More good work from you.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks so much Dan your read and kind words are always most appreciated

              • Goldfinch60

                So true soren, some things that happen in life are just inexplicable.

                Andy

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks so much Andy I always appreciate your most kind words

                • David Hopkins

                  That’s one of the favs for sure

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you so much David I appreciate your read and comment.

                  • Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice

                    I love how small details become profound here; very meditative and reflective.

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks so much Petra your words of support mean a great deal to me and are most appreciated

                    • Bashirah Asuku

                      Nicely written I like the poem

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you so much for your read and comment it is appreciated

                        • Bashirah Asuku

                          U are welcome

                        • cully45

                          liked it alot

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you so much for the read and most kind words, they are appreciated

                          • Soman Ragavan

                            The poet's eye catches what others miss. Hidden wonders reveal themselves.

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thanks so much Soman for the review and understanding words they are most appreciated



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