……My social paths was created, evil intentions feel bated, death is all around me and ideas of a heaven feel outdated, for a godly presence I waited, I think they lied to us there are no souls that made it, in our lives there is no karma and no gods to grade it, all a priest can do is debate it, but he has no proof his arguments are deflated, does a heaven exist, no soul has ever come back to state it. Emotions are let go cause they only increase the trauma, and make life’s pain more weighted.
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EvenwheniLie (Pseudonym) (
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The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.
Thanks, I thought it would make a great poem to get into the skin of a psychopath
You are most welcome
Sociopath? Feels pretty right to me..............
It’s their reasoning and motivation for a lack of empathy… nor sympathy
Seems to me you are equating sociopathy with atheism or agnosticism - which seems a little unfair.....
Actually no; the issue with the reasoning of a sociopath is that they learn to deal with life’s curves by doing away with their feelings, an atheist still has sympathy and is in tune with his feelings….
Thanks for the clarification - I accept that analysis.
The only one who made it to heaven is he that came from it. The rest have yet to happen. Don’t give up.
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