The making of a sociopath

evenwheniLie

 

 

 

 

……My social paths was created, evil intentions feel bated, death is all around me and ideas of a heaven feel outdated, for a godly presence I waited, I think they lied to us there are no souls that made it, in our lives there is no karma and no gods to grade it, all a priest can do is debate it, but he has no proof his arguments are deflated, does a heaven exist, no soul has ever come back to state it. Emotions are let go cause they only increase the trauma, and make life’s pain more weighted.

  • Author: EvenwheniLie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 22nd, 2025 10:38
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  • sorenbarrett

    The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.

    • evenwheniLie

      Thanks, I thought it would make a great poem to get into the skin of a psychopath

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Doggerel Dave

        Sociopath? Feels pretty right to me..............

        • evenwheniLie

          It’s their reasoning and motivation for a lack of empathy… nor sympathy

          • Doggerel Dave

            Seems to me you are equating sociopathy with atheism or agnosticism - which seems a little unfair.....

            • evenwheniLie

              Actually no; the issue with the reasoning of a sociopath is that they learn to deal with life’s curves by doing away with their feelings, an atheist still has sympathy and is in tune with his feelings….

              • Doggerel Dave

                Thanks for the clarification - I accept that analysis.



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