Sometimes She Just Cries
sometimes, she shouts
just get out ..
when she really means
don’t let go ..
then afterwards, when
the sweat
is gone and the tears
have all dried ..
she has on occasion been
known to just cry
hey babe now wasn’t that fun ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This little scribble is for all those who might think they are loved and who may have bitten off more than they can safely chew .. Since I would argue, that what you might see, hear and or feel, is not always for real, nor is it, all that you might get .. Contradictions, contraindications and a catastrophe in the making .. perhaps
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Sounds like KP and the way I treat her. lol.
One day, when you have been made into a draught excluder or a hand muff, or puppet .. you will only have yourself to blame & like I've said before KP must be more nutty than a big bag of peanuts .. 😎👍
Neville you have captured in verse a tempered spring where push and pull are responded to with corresponding opposite reaction. A wonderful write that keeps meter short and near rhyme intriguing. Well crafted it is a fave
Bless you my friend .. Neville
Always a pleasure my friend
Your poem "Sometimes She Just Cries" explores the complex emotional landscape of relationships, particularly focusing on the interplay between vulnerability and strength. The speaker reflects on moments of conflict and intimacy, revealing how words can often mask deeper feelings. The subject matter centers around the emotional states of a woman who oscillates between anger, longing, and sadness, ultimately highlighting the paradox of love where moments of tension can coexist with joy.
............................. You are amazing .. thank you so much .. 😎🌻🌹🥀👍
You're so welcome, my friend.😊❤️
Happily well in the past Neville, your quick poetic sketch reminded me too much of…..
Your comments were particularly relevant: I must commit the three ‘C’s to memory as an analytical aid to future (unlikely) engagements from which I might find it difficult to extricate myself….
That's absolutely fine by me .. a bit like the weather really .. Cheers 👍
Neville, that closing line...“hey babe now wasn’t that fun”...lands like a sigh. Equal parts irony and ache. Very well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Cheers🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛..👍
Cheers!
Perhaps Neville but not in my case.
Andy
I bet ya glad you got that off your chest .. cheers tho' 😎👍
I think this hits a nerve for more people then they would care to admit, it certainly has many elements that i have encountered in a relationship coming from both sides. A write that makes you have a think and that is a good thing.
I'm more than merely grateful my friend .. many thanks indeed for stopping by and for checking in .. Neville
Your welcome
Many a time a lady has been known to do just this🤐you have wrapped it up well
Many thank you's my friend .. Neville
I would love to know how you thought of “when she really means
don’t let go .."? Devastatingly simple yet conveying a wagon full payload. The magic touch of a magician
Blimey, I am honoured to bits & blown back again .. Thank you so bloomin much .. Neville 😎👍
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