There we were in the car
My lover and I,
She was driving
I was looking,
Looking at the beauty,
The beauty of Nature
As we passed by trees,
Trees and hedges.
The colours of Autumn
Were beginning to show.
The yellow, orange and red abounded
Chasing the green away.
Such a beautiful site
Enhanced by the beauty,
The beauty of my loved one
Forever at my side.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 11th, 2025 01:09
- Comment from author about the poem: We both drive and yesterday Mary was driving through the beautiful countryside.
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Comments4
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
So surrounded by beauty on all sides, Enjoyed the read
Very much so Tobani, much appreciated.
Andy
You are very welcome
Beauty is wonderful in whatever form it takes. A lovely write my friend
Thank you soren, so kind.
Andy
Most welcome Andy
I love how you captured both the colors of autumn and the feeling of being with someone you love. It's simple, yet it hits so deep. Beautifully written, my friend!
Very much appreciated My Boy Ryngkhlem, thank you.
Andy
You're welcome, Andy!
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