Sometimes

Caring dove

Sometimes 

your just not comfortable with something 

sometimes your insecure 

sometimes you don’t feel good enough 

and sometimes you want 

to just deal with your own feelings 

because that’s enough 

 

sometimes you wander where you are 

where you have gone 

how to have more confidence 

and how to be normal 

 

wandering 

why are those girls over there feeling more normal 

why are they more successful 

why have they confidence 

and I struggle half the time 

to even feel like myself 

or to understand who is even sitting here 

 

and sometimes people are unfair 

aswell ..

 

sometimes you don’t want to feel certain ways you don’t want to feel certain things

 

and you want to deal with your own feelings 

because sometimes that’s enough 

 

and sometimes other peoples behaviour is unfair 

 

and no 

I’m not always comfortable in myself 

or with certain things 

 

And sometimes some people have a problem and they need help 

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  • Paul Bell

    The thing is, the people you think are super confident actually have the same insecurities as yourself, they just might be hiding it better.
    Talking sure does help. Getting out in the fresh air too. Exercise brings confidence, and writing it all down halves the problem.

    • Caring dove

      Thanks for the kind words . I guess I struggle with the way I feel sometimes and that makes me a bit sad .

      True some people do hide it

      But it’s difficult to always feel you can do what you want when your not feeling confident

      • Paul Bell

        Start with little things, keep writing, you can't succeed till you fail.

      • sorenbarrett

        This poem explores themes of insecurity and uncertainty. It is an existential poem of finding oneself. We all need space being overwhelmed with all that is going on around us. This is normal and this poem is raw and nicely done as an expression of brave self disclosure.

        • Caring dove

          Yes I am and can be very insecure sometimes .. I can struggle with dissociation aswell.

          Our own space .. to feel comfortable with things ..

          Thankyou for the kind comment

          • sorenbarrett

            You are most welcome Caring dove and the best to you, hoping you become more secure through your poetry

            • Caring dove

              Thankyou )) and to you )

              I havnt been writing poems so much recently I just Havnt felt like it for some reason



            • peto

              We can all feel we dont belong
              You my dear
              Belong here
              Sometimes people are cruel but as your moniker tells me
              You are not one of them caring dove

            • orchidee

              Sometimes - ohhh, always! - a fine poem from you. 🙂

            • Goldfinch60

              Very emotive words Yellow Rose, we all have that d=feeling sometimes but on the whole life is good and I am sure a good lifewill come your way soon.

              Andy

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Caring Dove, this is compassion laid bare. You let imperfection breathe…and that makes the piece comforting, not sad. It reminds us we all wrestle with being enough, and that awareness itself is healing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

            • NafisaSB

              this insecurity touches most of us sometime or the other...some people are clever at hiding it, others lay bare their soul for the world to see..



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