Why Nothing Falls Together
I cannot think of you without
my seeing her ..
Then I get the strangest feeling ..
It’s like a union
occurs somewhere between my
memories, perceptions
and our collective unconscious ..
But nothing ever
falls together these days does it ..
It just seems
to keep falling apart, as always ..
So when I do
think back on the times we once
shared, it now all
seems fragmented and distanced ..
Still, I can’t help but
smile at the tears you then shed,
for one moment
back then, I thought, I might just
have meant something ..
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Author:
Neville (
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A poem so charged with quiet feeling for any that have experienced it that it can not help but be poetic and a fave. Well written my friend
Much appreciated .. thanks tons brother sorenbarrett .. Neville
You are always welcome my friend. Hope you are doing well
That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions and our collective unconscious”...is stunning. You blur philosophy and emotion until they fuse. I loved every bit of this, my dear Neville! Well done and a fave, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I am seriously well chuffed Tristan .. many HUMONGOUS THANKS .. Neville 🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛👍
You are most welcome, Neville!
Of course, my life fell apart the day I married KP! lol. But you knew that - yes?
I have a sneaking suspicion you may well be write .. 😎👍
Fragmented memories recollected in tranquility well captured here - I know, I have them and they aren't so very different beyond minor particular details...Enjoyed, Neville.
Good to hear and thanks Dave. Let me know when you begin to forget them and I'll send over the cheque I owe ya .. Thanks again .. Neville 😎👍
Cheques no longer valid currency - only gold bullion acceptable... mind you if you wait until my forgetting you could possibly get away with anything.....
All I can say is, you made me cry. I can't even explain why. Poetry I guess...
Maybe, still I'm so very sorry .. & thank you all the same .. Neville 😎👍
Memories of fleeting time can bring so much emotion to us Neville.
Andy
Indeed, cheers 😎👍
KP only shed tears cos she had run out of money for botox! lol.
Yep, UR nuttier than a Topic ..
Do Topics have nuts in them? I know Snickers do.
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