We were walking from our coffee shop
After having coffee and a chat with friends,
And the thought came to me.
Here we were two people in in love
Walking quite easily,
And there around us were others,
Others younger than us
Needing walking sticks and wheelchairs,
And us both nearing eighty years old
Walking easily in our life.
And that thought came,
Aren’t we so lucky,
So lucky in our life.
We can walk unaided,
We have a roof over our head,
And have all we need,
And mostly we have our love,
A love that is so strong
And will go on for eternity,
And beyond.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: October 27th, 2025 02:01
- Comment from author about the poem: This is true, the thought cam to me that there we were a couple in our late seventies still being able to walk around unaided while so many around us could not.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
Yes, us two been walking for millions of years!
We certainly have Orchi.
Have our shoes worn out?! lol.
Gratitude a wonderful thing that blesses the one that holds it. Looking for the silver lining in everything one finds it. A most wonderful and positive message. Glad you have the main things in life, health, love, and physical needs met.
Your words are much appreciated soren, thank you.
Andy
You are welcome Andy
Going to the doctors for test results on my bung feet. Looking toward a powered wheelchair, the one that Mr. Bean had looked promising.
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