Today I awoke from a fantasy broke
Its shimmer and gleams gone with the dreams
A new world's crust of tarnish and rust
As I realize sleep's lies have turned to dust
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Good write A. Some dreams can seem so real. When we wake up, we may say 'aww' if it was a nice dream, or say 'phew' in relief, if it was a bad dream.
Thanks so much Orchi I appreciate the read and comment. Yes sometimes I wonder which is the dream and which is reality.
So does KP when I feed her sewage. She says, 'Is this the reality of life for me?' I reply 'Yep! lol.
Lovely writing I feel calm and entranced just reading it
Thank you for the review and kind words of support they are most valued.
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