Deep slumber

sorenbarrett

Hope lies dressed as night where mother of dreams draws heavy covers over tired eyes
Cuddled in the lap of darkness I hear sirens of sleep sing soft lullabies
Warmed in a blanket of mended memories, so familiar it calls me home
A soothing stroke of a loose thread unravels visions of dread, too far did I roam
Time in sheets of wax, melts and stretches, a year fits in a single breath
I walk streets of sepia sketches, nature's laws have no power as I resurrect from death
Shadows loom in a dark room places familiar that I have never been
In the smoke of a dream, a fog it would seem to awaken before it did begin

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  • Lorenz

    Here is a dreamlike world that is very familiar to me....

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you very much Lorez for your review and yes this is familiar in its unfamiliar but recognized state to me.

    • arqios

      I feel how it captures the strange comfort of sleep, of time bending, memories mending, and dreams slipping away just as they begin. Thoroughly enjoyed, Soren 🕊️🙏

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Cryptic I as always appreciate the read and review. Your comments are deeply valued my friend

      • orchidee

        A fine write SB.
        BOO! I shout. Now why did I have to come along and wake ya up there?! lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Orchi it was time to get up. Appreciate the read and apology.

        • Teddy.15

          A famous spin on life and death and all that's inside this sandwich of life. 🌹

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much Teddy my friend for the review and kind words of encouragement they are always appreciated.

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Soren, this is a gorgeous descent into the subconscious...melting time, stitched memories, and the fog of waking. Luminous work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you my friend for your review and most poetic comment it is most appreciated

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                You are welcome, Soren!

              • Goldfinch60

                Beautiful words soren, may those dreams become reality.

                Andy

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you Andy your reads are always highly anticipated and your reviews most appreciated

                • NafisaSB

                  A big 👍✌️
                  Enjoyed reading and reflecting

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you so much for the read and kind words of encouragement they are appreciated



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