Of a core concealed, now stripped and revealed so little remains
Bits and scraps into twilight collapse, as night nothing contains
Peeled away in layers of decay, petals fall from the flower
With sun's crawl, remove a shawl shadow's won't stop the hour
A coat dropped, a bubble popped, a crust taken away
Shaving scales from eyes to see morning skies, awakened to a new day
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Online) - Published: November 29th, 2025 03:10
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Yep, sounds like KP when her botox melts, or fades away. She goes all saggy - and that's Too Much Information! lol.
Thanks Orchi for reading this sorry if it brings up troubling images.
Seh says to me: 'Don't ya just love it when I fall apart, when I'm all in a heap'. lol.
What about that old saying \"I love you to pieces\"?
this feels like truth is personified. Stripping away layer by layer.
Thank you so much Aman Thank you for your most interesting perspective on this. Light has been the symbol of truth historically. Your words are most appreciated
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