I Partake in Joy
I partake in joy on occasion
Like a hit, a puff of something illicit
She settles in and sits fully imbibed
She fills me with her grandiosity
In her throne of red velvet
I am compelled to join her
She captures abundance
Filling it to overflow
What she evokes moves me
It’s like the wonder that you can float in water
Her capacity to eliminate emptiness
Brings me to a knowingness that I want
More than just to partake
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Katie B. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: about pure joy
- Category: Reflection
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Your poem “I Partake in Joy” explores the transient yet profound experience of joy, likening it to a momentary high that fills the speaker with a sense of abundance and fulfillment. It reflects a longing for deeper connection and understanding beyond fleeting pleasures.
Yes! You give excellent comments/reviews!!!
You are welcome, my friend.
Substances, knowledge, meditation, spiritual enlightenment, sexual climax, deep profound relationship of love, all point to a sense of enlightenment, joy, extasy nirvana, salvation we all want to partake. Nicely written
Thank you for your observations and astute comments.
You are most welcome Katie
Moderation is the key. When is to much joy not enough?
Maybe I should be taking my own advice!
A deep and excellent read🙏🏻🕊️
That is quite a compliment!
My friend, this shines with soft depth…the red-velvet throne, the buoyancy of floating, the fullness pushing out emptiness. You wrote joy as something embodied, something to dwell in, not just taste. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May that joyfulness be forever in your life Katie.
Andy
Thank you and bless you. You as well.
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