Paradise my cell, nature's heaven my hell
Marooned, banished all hope vanished
My only words shared with poetic birds
Cottony ears of sky I beseech, a signal of rescue to reach
Deaf clouds move on and soon are gone
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Helplessness is what I find here, powerful and emotionally connected to what I also feel, about our world and our environment. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
Thank you so much for your read my friend and appreciate your interpretation
Good write SB. Yes, I left KP marooned on an island for about, oh, 20 years or so. Or I wish I could! lol. 'More sewage, dear?' are the beautiful words I say to her each day. It's my version of saying to her 'I love you'. heehee.
Thanks so much Orchi for the read yes we all have our own ways of telling people we love them and marooned is not bad if one likes violet.
Loneliness is a disease, and a killer disease at that.
Humans need to talk, and it seems now millions sit in empty houses decaying.
Once upon a time you had neighbours, but not anymore in this world of privacy.
Thank you Paul I appreciate your read of this piece and your understanding. Yes in a strange world where privacy extends to knowing your neighbor but not to anything else where all is exposed on the internet and government sources and nothing is private.
Lovely, favorite line "deaf clouds move on."
Thank you Katie for your read and kind words of support they are always appreciated
Sometimes beauty and the beautiful are impotent and unavailable emotionally like a garden that although in full bloom does not evoke any intense emotion or doesn’t connect, hence the prison. Truly a sad state where beauty is a communal thing and expressed in companionability🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you my friend for the read and understanding of this poem. Yes you have hit the core of the meaning in this one. It is most appreciated
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