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all you can eat cake
until the flood
then we are
closed
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Author:
Jon Nakapalau (
Offline) - Published: December 4th, 2025 22:18
- Comment from author about the poem: Sorry to be so grim!
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
Enjoy that cake Jon.
Andy
Thanks Andy!
Whether intended as the form of a coffee cup with steam coming off in asterisks or a cup with a straw it was a great image and as for being open until the flood Noah would agree or just maybe a different type of flood. Loved it was a great short
Thank you! It was supposed to form a line - but got changed!
You are most welcome
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