Loving you feels like gazing at stars and the moon,
But loneliness and hopelessness is what i only own.
It often feels like an obsession with no escape,
The heart is being poisoned in a deadly landscape,
Finally, the heart feels forbidden,
And love is eternally kept hidden.
- Salvia.S
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As the stars and moon shine let love shine, there is no harm in giving of your light. Some may choose to shield it or not look at it but it makes no difference. A most poetic and lovely write Salvia and a fave
Thank you so much. Very much appreciated!!!!
You are most welcome
Well written, the poem explores the complex emotions surrounding unrequited love or love that is fraught with pain and isolation. It juxtaposes the beauty of love with the feelings of loneliness and despair that can accompany it.
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Dearest Salvia, my friend, this is tender and heartbreaking…the star-bright love, the poisoned loneliness, the heart hiding what it can’t bear to lose. You captured that emotional divide with real grace. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you very much dearest Tittu ❤️!!!
Good write S.
Thank you so much
Dear Salvia, very deep and sincere write full of overwhelming emotions and feelings. I enjoy it)
Thank you so much dear!! Much appreciated.
Love conveys hearts and kisses.
Yet, as we see here, love can be a dagger to the heart.
Thank you for the read and feedback. Much appreciated!!!
May that love come to the fore soon Salvia.
Andy
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the pain and pangs of unrequited love are described in a very emotional way - but do not despair - Cupid can strike when least expected - so keep the hopes shining
Thank you so much for the read and feedback!!! Surely.
most welcome, dear..take care..
Loneliness and my crazy brain. I felt this
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