winter palette

arqios

winter palette


Winter leans in
with a painter’s restraint,
lifting soft blues
from the frost’s first breath,
letting treeโ€‘shadows sketch
silver across the ground.
Branches rise like quiet script,
each stroke a reminder
that paredโ€‘back beauty
asks only to be seen.

 

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    This is poetry my friend where imagery blends with metaphor and words cast shadows that in their coolness brings memories and something deeper from the past and inside the soul. Cold beauty to be looked at through glass in a warmer room. A fave

    • arqios

      Thanks, Soren. Sometimes how we call things affects not just how we approach things but how the world becomes. ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome Cryptic indeed the world is what we see it

      • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

        great write, much enjoyed

      • arqios

        Thanks for the Fave @Alan R ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿคฉ๐ŸŒท

      • Friendship

        Well written, my friend. I enjoy, fave

        • arqios

          Thanks so much, dear Friendship ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

        • Doggerel Dave

          Picture and piece in perfect harmony.
          Simple, very pleasing Rik.

          • arqios

            Cheers, mate ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            My friend, this is beautifully observedโ€ฆthe soft blues, the silver shadows, the quiet script of branches. You let winter be spare without ever feeling empty. A lovely piece, Rik. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

            • arqios

              Lovely and not lonely, thatโ€™s how winter should be. It isnโ€™t always like that but thatโ€™s the hope anyway ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

            • orchidee

              Good write A. How's that summer going there where you are?!

              • arqios

                Making me wish for that white Christmas of yore! ๐ŸŽ„๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

              • Kevin Hulme

                Yes, Like it . Maybe a few lines , but so much fine description.

                • arqios

                  Thanks, Kevin. It has a longer rendition which will have its turn to be posted one day๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

                • Goldfinch60

                  Beautiful artwork in words Rik.

                  Andy

                  • arqios

                    Thanks, Andy. This is such an honour to hear ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿคฉ

                  • NafisaSB

                    such a wonderful and heartfelt description of winter...

                    • arqios

                      Thank you kindly๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

                      • NafisaSB

                        you are always welcome..

                      • thinkerbell

                        Beautifully written

                        • arqios

                          Thank you, thinkerbell! Happy new year ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ



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