Dawn
Before sparrows sing
Stillness settles in the eves.
Time lapses if stalled and
Humans slumber in tranquility.
But I, I rejoice
In the night sky’s resilience where
Silence curves around the edges
Slipping into my snug fitting robe.
Where solace blankets,
Peace lingers, ever present, abiding
My mind, devoid of clutter
Revels in the intoxication of solitude.
Sacred hours melt into dawn
And I, I greet the world anew.

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Your poem explores the theme of tranquility and renewal that comes with the transition from night to day. It captures the beauty of solitude and the peaceful moments before dawn, emphasizing the poet's intimate connection to the quiet moments of the early morning.
Yes, beautiful summary. I love how you are able to encapsulate a poem. You have great talent and insight. As always, thank you for sharing your feedback.
A truly extraordinary feeling! ποΈππ»
Bless you!
Blessed hours before the dawn, hours of peace and calm. A lovely poem Katie
Bless you!
I thank you Katie and you are welcome
A fine write, Katie. A fine morning read.
Bless you!!
Dawn is the best time of day.
I hit the roads at dawn, me the birds and trees in harmony.
Then I join the humans at rush hour and bitch.
I'm usually up at 4 and it's a serene yet majestic time of day. Thank you!!
amazing poem has feeling and emotion
words present the poem perfectly nice to read
you have an amazing talent keep,writing dont waste it jim xx
Thank you so much! What an amazing compliment! You have made my day. I am completely passionate about this craft! Thank you again for your kind words!!!
Your poem is very uplifting. I will think of it at 3am tomorrow. I wouldn't miss it. Thank you, Katie.
Thank you so much Perdita!
May that new world be always full of peace and love Katie.
Andy
This poem brought me peace thank you for sharing
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to read it!
Tranquility oozes through thos beautiful piece of verse. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Xmas π€Άππ
Thank you so much Nafisa. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Thanks - had a peaceful one.. hope yours was great..
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