I Succumb
I succumb to ends of days
To ends of nights
Where the wind lays low
Where the bough bends, not breaks
I reject I’ll fitting garments
That sinch my waist and
Smother me with stiff, forgotten lamb’s wool
Where denim, devoid of elasticity, binds
I witness the belief of disbelief
A fool’s handshake, his
Tight, sweaty grasp
Squeezing my cold, limp
Hand of apathy
I suffer at the dire reach of poverty
The stricken, the voiceless
The heartache of lowly demise
In a state where trees and stars serve as meager shelters
I crave the certainty
Of tenderness that
Blows away the darkness
That harnesses a blistered soul
I rejoice in companionship
That fills the inherent void we mask
Embracing weariness
Bolstering the broken hearted
I relish the satiety of existence
Where wisdom imparts
Where empathy prevails
Where acceptance unites
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Author:
Katie B. (
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- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
That tenderness will always be with you Katie as you write your fine words for us to read.
Andy
Thank you for the high praise. I am humbled by your words. Happy new year..
Good write K.
This year has been an excellent one for poetic companionship! Happy new year, Katie 🕊️🙏🏻
Katie, this is reflective and compassionate. You move through suffering without turning away, then choose empathy and acceptance as acts of defiance. By the end, unity feels hard-won and hopeful. Thoughtful, sincere work. Happy New Year to you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you Tristan for your generous feedback. It is humbling and most appreciated. Happy New Year.
Very nice; in hard times, compassion, connection, and acceptance remain the deepest nourishment of existence.
Thank you so much for your comments, greatly appreciated.
My pleasure.
A fine write, Katie. I enjoyed the read. Happy New Year.
Thank you so much Jerry!
great reflections - i basically agree with your wishes and thoughts...let's hope they materialize
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