Shadows fade into the past a cool breeze that doesn't last
Sprouted seeds grown to weeds fallen on dry ground recedes
Sun raises crawls and falls images of the past recalls
Days that were warm, those of storm, familiar landscape did transform
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Good write SB. I'm growing some seeds that will sprout to weeds to feed to KP! lol. How can I thank you enough for helping me with recipes for her?! lol.
Thanks so much Orchi for the read and comment. I heard that thistles make good tooth brushes.
Lol.
I suppose in a way, life and death, natures way.
Storm Goretti hits Britain today, we'll all be perishing weeds at the end of it.
Is it sunny in Brazil by any chance.
Light rain today where I am. Thank you so much Paul for the read and comment it is memories shades that fade in this life my friend
Atmosphere in melancholic tones as if time did not want to die...
Thank you Lorenz for the read and comment yes you are so right time does not want to die and only will when the last man dies as well
Excellent, my friend! I relate to how landscapes change while still feeling familiar. The past doesn’t disappear, it just rearranges itself. This captures that quiet disorientation well. Wonderful job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much Tristan I appreciate the read and comment and it is most valued
You are most welcome, Soren!
Lovely as usual!!
Thank you Katie for the read and comment it is most appreciated
A very nice, deep, and really a multifaceted write) Rather emotional and sincere...
Thank you for the review and kind words of support they are most appreciated
Loving the feel of this. Its spareness of structure and fullness of movement and imagery are a truly engaging contrast. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you so much Cryptic for your read and comment it is most encouraging and appreciated
All things change in our lives soren, mainly for the good.
Andy
Thank you Andy for your review and kind words of support they are most highly esteemed
Sometimes the Landscape is like People you haven't seen for a few years; you suddenly see how they've Changed when comparing Photographs. A fine Poem.
Thank you so much for the read and comment yes all things change over time even memories.
Shadows slip off the edges of memory, breezes whisper through what used to be green.time-worn energy set in motion
Thank you so much for your read and response Aman it is most appreciated
Indeed, when we look around us we see the transience of nature in plants, humans and animals. Everything goes in a cycle. Shadows fade; the breeze does not last; there is reproduction, new life; the old one fades away.
Thank you so much Soman for the review of this piece. Yes you are so right and that is the theme of this piece. Your words are most appreciated.
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