Aunt Elanor

Katie B.

                     Aunt Eleanor                               

 

        She is my best friend, Aunt Eleanor.

        She is like candy, sweet and you always                want more.

        She is my mom’s sister; they don’t look                  alike.

        She is our neighbor too.

 

        She said she didn’t

        have any children because I was plenty.

        Plenty of what is what I thought.

 

        Her nightly back scratch is soothing like                melted molasses.

        When she stops, I’m lonely as a ghoul

        because I know she will go.

          

        Her hair is worn snatched up in a ponytail

        pulling her eyes tight like a knot. When she            wears

        green it pulls those perfect blue eyes                      straight

        to me.

 

        She is not pretty, she is beautiful, like a                  Barbie

        with a pink car. She’s kinder than any friend          at my school.

 

       On Monday mom came and got me from               school

       at one o’clock. On the way home she said

       something I didn’t understand. She said

       Aunt Eleanor had a stroke. Mom held

       my sticky hands in Eleanor’s room.

 

       I missed her eyes that shined like sparklers           on the fourth.

       Then her eyes closed and all the other eyes           cried.

 

       I don’t know the name for it at six.

       It is like a lightning bug that lost her light.

       It is like when Buster’s tail stops wagging.

                          

                                Mom said it is sorrow.

                                Dad said it is grief.

                                I say it is alone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

           

     

                               

                        

Aunt Eleanor                               

 

        She is my best friend, Aunt Eleanor.

        She is like candy, sweet and you always want more.

        She is my mom’s sister; they don’t look alike.

        She is our neighbor too.

 

        She said she didn’t

        have any children because I was plenty.

        Plenty of what is what I thought.

 

        Her nightly back scratch is soothing like melted molasses.

        When she stops, I’m lonely as a ghoul

        because I know she will go.

          

        Her hair is worn snatched up in a ponytail

        pulling her eyes tight like a knot. When she wears

        green it pulls those perfect blue eyes straight

        to me.

 

        She is not pretty, she is beautiful, like a k

 

       On Monday mom came and got me from school

       at one o’clock. On the way home she said

       something I didn’t understand. She said

       Aunt Eleanor had a stroke. Mom held

       my sticky hands in Eleanor’s room.

 

       I missed her eyes that shined like sparklers on the fourth.

       Then her eyes closed and all the other eyes cried.

 

                                I don’t know the name for it at six.

                                It is like a lightning bug that lost her light.

                                It is like when Buster’s tail stops wagging.

                          

                                Mom said it is sorrow.

                                Dad said it is grief.

                                I say it is alone.

 

 

 

           

     

                               

                        

 

 

                               

                               

 

 

                               

                               

 

  • Author: Katie B. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 22nd, 2026 02:46
  • Category: Short story
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  • sorenbarrett

    This is a wonderful poem written in free style that is quite emotional in the loss of someone special to something sad that there is no one but nature to blame for. A piece that touches the heart as all poetry should

    • Katie B.

      Thank you you so much!!!

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Katie

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        My friend, this is a stunning use of form and voice. Experimental free verse...which I LOVE. The simplicity of a child’s perspective lets the emotions speak without filtering, and those closing lines ache with truth. It’s gentle, honest, and unforgettable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Katie B.

          Thank you so very much for your kind words!!

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            You are most welcome, Katie.

          • Goldfinch60

            Superb words Katie and very emotional.

            Andy



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