alluring moon
an alluring
moon
bathes in generosity
of the
enveloping sky
stars twirl
into nothingness
as I lay a
blind eye to the wind
bulb’s burst
with possibilities
on ocean’s rim
the trickling
down of rain
swells
uneven earth
day succumbs to
darkness
and lays
down forthright
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Author:
Katie B. (
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- Category: Nature
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Comments4
A most beautiful portrayal of the passing of time and all set in the symbols of nature. Well written
Reading this reminded me of those moments when day gives up without protest and you just let yourself drift with it. The way you let darkness arrive feels accepting rather than ominous. I felt that ease. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Fine words Katie.
Andy
more elegant imagery from you
Thank you so much for your generous words!!! The are much appreciated.
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