"Your will is mine!
Sometimes
I`ll let you have some down time
Before giving the reins
A shake once again"
Said the belief
From its dungeon
In the deeps
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Mutley Ravishes (
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Even wills need a rest from time to time and even beliefs recognize this. Well written my friend
Haha! Indeed.
That’s control speaking in its true voice—quiet, patient, cruel.
Short lines, deep pit; belief as a jailer is a damn sharp turn.
Thanks Thomas. I was seeing belief as a jailer. And as jailed itself!
Mutley, this is unsettling in a quiet way. The voice of belief as something that dominates and withdraws at will feels disturbingly familiar. It lands with a chill. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Yes, it`s all too familiar! Thanks for dropping by.
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